She and He
She doesn't know him before.
But her heart was beating faster each minute,
Faster than the seconds hand of the clock.
"No, I shouldn't be the first to tell."
-she said to herself,
Looking at him for the umpteenth time.
At last, she mustered up courage and blurted out,
"Will you please stop smoking?".
The other passengers in the bus didn't seem to care.
But her heart was beating faster each minute,
Faster than the seconds hand of the clock.
"No, I shouldn't be the first to tell."
-she said to herself,
Looking at him for the umpteenth time.
At last, she mustered up courage and blurted out,
"Will you please stop smoking?".
The other passengers in the bus didn't seem to care.
posted by Fathima Sagar | 6:00:00 am
13 Comments:
sappai matterukku rombo thinking nu me thinks
nalla irukku.:)
for a moment there i thought she was going to apologise for something :-)
Meendum Oru Kaadhal Kadhai-nnu nanachene ....che!
Enjoyed this one :-)
Thanx Prabu Karthik and Vinesh.
Iris, u shud xpect the unxpected.
Clever wording. The line about her heart beating faster, doesn't fit in, though.
I know this is the GK book (read as kumudham) effect. Good Fathi. U grab from everywhere.
Jinguchakka,
Thanx. Her heart is beating faster thinking, what if the guy gets angry and shouts at her. So she is afraid a bit to say that.
(But where did u get this name from? Envying that!);-)
Parthi,
Thanx. One keeps learning.
aahaa fathima:)
But i can understand and relate to your poem.
Good one.
Oh Divi, Thanx. I think I wud have written a better one, if I had thought u in the place of that girl! Your expressions of frustration cannot b beaten by anyone Divi!
oye ...kalakura..
Thanx Reetu
prana vayu illai....oraay pugai...
athanaal thaan heart vegamaga beat seythathoo?
Tamilan, as u said, its not prana vaayu... marana vaayu
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